Ok Casey. But it would make much more sense to write chronologically, not backwards. I would have liked to see better organization, an explanation of whether your sources were "mainstream" or African-American papers and a better sense of cause and...
Nice job, Jonathan. But I wish that you would avoid the first person, and that you had spent less time on the I Have a Dream speech (we talked about it in class). More sources would have helped and better proofreading for grammar, usage and spelli...
Good work, Zac! I would have liked to see a bit more on Perot, there are a few typos and the citations aren't formatted properly, but this is really very good! Definitely your best this year. You should be proud.
Good work, Zac! I would have liked to see a bit more on Perot, there are a few typos and the citations aren't formatted properly, but this is really very good! Definitely your best this year. You should be proud.
You have a bit of nice info here, but this paper is quite short and doesn't seem to have any thesis. More sources and more information would have been much more helpful.
Lots of very good info in this paper, Chelsea--I can tell that you did a lot of research. But the quality of the document is lacking a bit. You should check your spelling (statue≠statute; out way≠outweigh) and avoid floating quotes. Mostly, I woul...
Excellent job! There are a couple of minor errors (for instance, the issue in the case was not "executive power" but "executive privilege") but overall this is super! Definitely the best paper of the bunch. Outstanding. Congratulations.